Thursday, 14 March 2013

The Shadow by Josh





                                                          The Shadow 


The Shadow... She is a bad guy  who works for the agency b.g.a.. She wears cool clothes made out of rubber and silk, she wears black shades, a black cap, carries a magnify find glass and carries  keys in her pocket. The Shadow hides her face by putting a newspaper in front of her face. She is swift and stealthy. The Shadow sneaks like a flash, she is as fast as lighting.

By Josh

We have been learning to write character descriptions. For this description we were writing character descriptions based on some character clues Ms Cleland gave us. The character had a black cap, a newspaper, keys, black sunglasses and a magnify glass. This is the story Josh wrote.

1 comment:

  1. Wow what a great story Josh and so descriptive. Keep up the great work. Nicola H

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